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photo by Jason Stanfield

The season officially ended when he walked into the room
He saw me prior to that
Yet I was unaware of his magic.
Under watchful direction
*ACTION*
we drifted to
another state of mind.
I imagined I was his and he was mine
The ceiling opened up only for us.
-CUT-
*ACTION*
We slid upon the white hot vinyl underneath the stars
A warm gentle breeze blows his scent up to me.
We kissed.
I blush with heat from desire.
-CUT-
*ACTION*
He tastes warm and sweet and a bit like coffee.
Kissing me, he drifted to another place and time.
Our lips moved perfectly together despite the choreography
"Trouble", he said, then pulled me closer.
-CUT-
*ACTION*
I feel sweat forming on his stomach.
Beautiful and bittersweet, our kisses move to
splayed necks and earlobes
He submerged into my eyes
I gently fade into him
I was his and he was mine for one
night underneath the stars.
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Comments

[Brechi]

i liked it ;)

[manny]

your so f-en awesome, it sounds weird but i could relate to your poems in a way

[Alexander]

Smokin'...nice use of photo and poem---took us inside.

[Jimmy]

Amazing! I'm speechless.

[Mirko]

You are very very hot. I like you
so kizzes
Mirko From Argentina

[Caz]

Oh my! I said it before and I`ll say it again.. You have AMAZING way with words!!!

I LOVED it! So simple words can be so expressive and meaningful! TOTALLY beautiful! <3

I`m so glad you posted another of your poems..

Shall be waiting for more of your gorg poems,Corey!! :D

Please take care and all the best! :)

Lovely picture..;)

[jason]

Corey, beautiful, beautiful poem. You totally put the reader into your space in time.

[M@]

OH. MY. GOD. that was HOT!

*(also I want to see more of these pics!)

I think I need a moment to myself.

[Lost Monkey]

beautiful!

[luciano]

Dude, that was AWESOME! You're more creative than I thought. Very cool, thanks. Oh, how did you get the picture??? I want copies. Chat w. u later.